I read it in 30 minutes  and loved it.

In the 6th paragraph above the Sea Captain it reads ‘If I tell you that the way your(change it to YOU not YOUR) compose your life-narrative leads you to the treasure”

and in the paragraph just above him you need to pop in an  ‘a’ after there is ‘a’ guiding system. Here’s the line – ” If you heard that t…[Read more]